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Post by jt25 on Oct 13, 2004 19:30:34 GMT -5
You'll probably show up at the gathering and steal all the Kylie and Alanis songs, foiling Craig & Jessica's attempt to have all of us listen to them. LOL!
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Post by FreakyFlyBry on Oct 13, 2004 19:33:23 GMT -5
I'll have some party crashers coming up in a future chapter
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Post by FreakyFlyBry on Oct 13, 2004 19:50:49 GMT -5
Chapter 3
At another day at school, Adam and Jessica meet up again, noticing there's a performance of the school play in the afternoon following their last classes for the day. They decide to sneak in the gym to the rehearsal.
Meanwhile, David brings his second grade class up there, and notices 2 somewhat familiar faces in the audience. He then comes up to Adam and Jessica, realizing where he knew them from. Suddenly, his cell phone rings, and the ushers at the play escort him out, as no cell phones were allowed during the rehearsal.
Adam and Jessica then leave the gym too, to talk to David. Then an announcement comes on the intercom, saying that their school was overrun by aliens! They then catch a glimpse of the people who made the announcement... turns out, it was Ben, Dan, and Jason, who had come around to try to drill some sense in the population of the school...
To be continued...
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Post by jt25 on Oct 13, 2004 19:53:01 GMT -5
Chapter 3At another day at school, Adam and Jessica meet up again, noticing there's a performance of the school play in the afternoon following their last classes for the day. They decide to sneak in the gym to the rehearsal. Meanwhile, David brings his second grade class up there, and notices 2 somewhat familiar faces in the audience. He then comes up to Adam and Jessica, realizing where he knew them from. Suddenly, his cell phone rings, and the ushers at the play escort him out, as no cell phones were allowed during the rehearsal. Adam and Jessica then leave the gym too, to talk to David. Then an announcement comes on the intercom, saying that their school was overrun by aliens! They then catch a glimpse of the people who made the announcement... turns out, it was Ben, Dan, and Jason, who had come around to try to drill some sense in the population of the school... To be continued... LOL! LOL! LOL!
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Post by merg on Oct 13, 2004 19:54:55 GMT -5
You'll probably show up at the gathering and steal all the Kylie and Alanis songs, foiling Craig & Jessica's attempt to have all of us listen to them. hell yeah i'd do that! nobody can dance all night to Alanis and Kylie, you NEED me
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Post by jt25 on Oct 13, 2004 19:55:34 GMT -5
hell yeah i'd do that! nobody can dance all night to Alanis and Kylie, you NEED me LOL, but it isn't gonna happen.... you either get Alanis or nothing
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Post by Deleted on Oct 13, 2004 20:12:46 GMT -5
Meanwhile, David brings his second grade class up there, and notices 2 somewhat familiar faces in the audience. He then comes up to Adam and Jessica, realizing where he knew them from. Suddenly, his cell phone rings, and the ushers at the play escort him out, as no cell phones were allowed during the rehearsal. Adam and Jessica then leave the gym too, to talk to David. Then an announcement comes on the intercom, saying that their school was overrun by aliens! They then catch a glimpse of the people who made the announcement... turns out, it was Ben, Dan, and Jason, who had come around to try to drill some sense in the population of the school... Bryan, do you really think I would subject my innocent 2nd graders to ANYBODY on this board? My poor little innocents would never recover after meeting the likes of Jason and ... well ... just Jason, I guess.
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Post by jt25 on Oct 13, 2004 20:33:59 GMT -5
Bryan, do you really think I would subject my innocent 2nd graders to ANYBODY on this board? My poor little innocents would never recover after meeting the likes of Jason and ... well ... just Jason, I guess. Jason, please don't reply to David, because if you do, then you and Jason will keep chatting off-topic again!
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Post by jt25 on Oct 13, 2004 20:42:39 GMT -5
I think the new chapter is crap, but I tried... and besides, if you don't like it, Bryan (#1), then you can re-write it and make it make more sense Chapter 4Ari is listening to a mix CD he created with Tori Amos, Dave Matthews, Bjork, and other music he showed his love for on M4B. Then, he checks his mail and saw a letter from Steven, about an M4BCC convention. He decides to go so he can meet all his M4BCC friends. Bryan #2 also gets a letter from Steven, and like Ari, Bry #2 is interested. Since Jessica has always said to him, "I am your #1 fan of your VFM shows!", he thought he'd make a good DJ for the convention, but little did he know what Craig and Jessica were planning. To be continued...Bryan, I decided not to write about the convention since I couldn't think of anything good
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Post by Deleted on Oct 13, 2004 20:47:21 GMT -5
jajajaa, I'm on the story!! ;D
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Post by jt25 on Oct 13, 2004 20:50:53 GMT -5
jajajaa, I'm on the story!! ;D *still trying to figure out what "jajaja" means*
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Post by Deleted on Oct 13, 2004 20:56:14 GMT -5
*still trying to figure out what "jajaja" means* You're so cute! I answered that in the scary stories thread
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Post by Deleted on Oct 13, 2004 21:03:38 GMT -5
You're so cute! I answered that in the scary stories thread Jessica, Darlin', ya gotta be global, Baby! This is the home of GLOBALchart, right? Ari laughs in Spanish. "jajajajaja" is the Spanish version of "hahahahahaha." Jo-L laughs in French, if you haven't noticed! We have laughter from all over on these boards
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Post by M! on Oct 13, 2004 21:17:36 GMT -5
My turn.
Chapter 5
MISSING.
To be continued...
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Post by Deleted on Oct 13, 2004 21:22:35 GMT -5
My turn. Chapter 5MISSING.To be continued... M-Dude, the beginning showed a lot of promise, but your middle is seriously flawed, and the ending contains errors in logic flow. Aside from that, it was great!
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